I love it when you make me smile
because it lasts for a while
When I look into your eyes
it feels like time flies
Throughout the day we may fight
but at the end of the day I need you with me in the night
Whenever I smell your scent
It makes me melt
words about you can go on
but by that time I will hit the floor!
Today I was thinking about someone, and I found myself thinking about him a little more, so I thought why not make a post about him. But a lot of words never came to mind about him, so I told myself “Why not try writing a short poem”. And this is what I came up with.
I hope you enjoy reading!
really cute!
sometimes just thinking about someone for no particular reason is the best!
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I know! And so many thoughts about that one person comes to mind. What do you think?
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how much i miss seeing her smile at me, and how she made me feel when she did… 😪
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Ohh! Did you break up with her recently?
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no. long story.
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😄😄😄
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aboutdawn.wordpress.com
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Is this her blog??
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mine about her.
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Your blog is about her??
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It is less a blog, and more of a message in a bottle for her to read after I have passed away.
same as aboutpamela.wordpress.com. if you’re going to waste time reading that dribble first. it helps the Dawn one make more sense.
although to be honest, it’s all just rambling anyway…
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Rambling! No I don’t think so. And I like the fact that you said read from bottom to top. That is interesting about your ‘messages being past on’.
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Lovely
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome
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Very beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much!
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beautifully expressed..
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Thank you!
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Its my pleasure. Have a great week ahead 🙂
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You too!!!
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Thanks 🙂
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This is nice. How I hope I can feel this way with a special person. too.. It’s been a long while… I think I have forgotten to sugary side of love.
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No. You just have to find that special someone, and everything and more you will feel. 😊😊
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I hope I find him soon.. But first I need to get out of the complicated situation I am in right now and fix myself. I want my heart to be ready when the time comes.. 🙂
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Follow your heart. It will always lead you to the right thing. I hope you get out of your current situation! 😊😊
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Thank you.. I wish you all the best, too. 🙂
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Thank you! We both need luck in our relationships! 🙂
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Aaww nice to recall memories of a loved one, and being able to write about it.
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Yes. Thank you. As long as the memories are about a loved one and not someone who broke our hearts!
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Yes definitely, happy memories are what keep us going.
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I couldn’t agree with you more!
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👍🏼
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Hi nice read! You can catch my work of short poems at https://soniyaagrawalblog.wordpress.com/ Would love to get your feedback!
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Thank you! I am right now checking out your short poems 🙂
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